Hmmm pressure...
Alex, I patterned mine after yours, for continuity. But I'm having a bit of a problem with rhyme and measure. Ang, Bas, Alex, Nutman, everyone, please, please polish these lines -- add, edit, delete, whatever. Now I'm looking for a rock to hide under. Here goes nothing...
Strength undeniable, you carry the weight of the crowd's expectations
Yet you thrive in adversity -- a valiant flower blooming in this unforgiving wild
When the fickle crowd gives you aggravations*,
Take comfort in the knowledge* that you are loved
Courage unfathomable, you face the fears that others tremble on
You tread the unknown with your heart to guide you
Amidst the chaos, you keep your head and your ground
Your courage* emboldens me when I face my demons**
* not sure if this is the right word
** the line seems awkward