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Re: Story Time
« Reply #60 on: June 22, 2009, 08:31:20 AM »
Yeah, awesome story, but I'm disappointed, as Amber, Dante and myself don't seem to be included. What's up with that? This is our story too ya know.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #61 on: June 22, 2009, 02:41:45 PM »
Naruto pulled out a device as he pressed a red button. In a Flash Three people, Amber, Phoenix and Dante are now standing in front of them. "What is it now Naruto?" Phoenix asked, but notices the smirk on Naruto's face. The newly arrivals smiled as well, "This is what we're going to do," Naruto started to explain the plan he had in his head. Later the guards entered the hotel, but they felt like they shouldn't be here since the stories they have heard or read the book by Stephen King when he was here. "I-I-I-I-I don't know about this sir... I heard stories about this hotel," the leader stepped forward showing no signs of fright, but in his head he is scared, "Don't let no ghost story scare you Barba... Ghost don't actually exist!" "AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" "AHHH! Don't kill me!" the leader screamed. Far from ear shot Gina, which she was the one who made the scream, is with Phoenix laughing, "Good one! Now it's my turn." Phoenix lifted one finger and started to swirl it around in a circle as smoke started to come out of the tip. The gaurds walked right below them and stopped. "What?" one asked. "Shh!" He looked around, so did the other. Then two ghostly figures walked out of one wall and into the other, "EEEEEEEEEE!!!" the guards ran out of the hotel. Gina and Phoenix laughed as they watched as the six last guards split up. "Amber, Jen three gaurds are headed your way, Naruto, Mkygod and Dante three are headed your way," said Gina. Amber answered, "Let the fun begin!" Naruto asnwered, "Let's rock this joint," "Hell Yeah!" Mkygod and Dante said. TO BE CONTINUED

(Phoenix I was going to put you guys in, but I decided to save you guys for the exciting parts).
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #62 on: June 22, 2009, 05:43:58 PM »
(Phoenix I was going to put you guys in, but I decided to save you guys for the exciting parts).

Good save man, LOL! Story is very interesting I must say. It really should change to the title Dante gave, as we've all discontinued our parts, haha.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #63 on: June 22, 2009, 06:43:04 PM »
I'm sure I can, but I'm not going to. One day Naruto will maybe get bored and then we'll have to take over, or something else will happen. Be prepared for the unexpected.  :)
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #64 on: June 23, 2009, 01:57:44 PM »
Meanwhile... Bastiaan was training with Randy, Kim, Glenn and Dana. "What's this guy got what I ain't got?" Randy asked. "As you can see seven out of nine tailed beasts have been killed, due to their hosts being killed, Bastiaan and Naruto are the only ones left... Santos plan was to gather all nine of them and use Gina's power to convert the energy so that Santos will be able to control the massive amount of chakra the creatures have... But since seven were killed," "Only two are left," Kim finished. Glenn shook his head. They watched as Bastiaan does some amazing stunts. "How long do I have to do this?" he asked. "Until you get it right! Last time you nearly blew up the temple with that stupid attack of yours." Glenn remembered the last time he was training Bastiaan. He made a strong, powerful attack that blew the side of the temple away; all Bastiaan said was, "Oops!"

Back to the other world... Naruto, Mkygod and Dante were waiting for the three guards. Dante peeked and saw them coming towards them with their weapons drawn. "They're coming," he whispered to Mkygod. He gave the thumbs up to Naruto, which he gave Mkygod the signal. Dante and Mkygod's hands started to glow blue with a low humming noise coming from them. One guard haulted as the others did the same. They can hear the low humming noise but couldn't tell where it was coming from. In front of them a door swung opened, violently, and closed again. A chair was thrown from one end of the hallway to the other, along with a coffee table. "We're not afraid of ghosts!" one of the guards said. "BOO!" "AHHHHHH! KILL THEM EXCEPT FOR ME!!!" said he running outside of the hotel. Amber watched the guards running like little girls as she focused her attention to the other guards headed towards her and Jen. She signaled Jen as the two girls started to chant a language of the dead. "W-what is that? What is that?" one guards started to do a fancy foot work. They saw two little girls at the end of the hallway; very erie girls who're standing in the hallway alone holding hands. "Who are you? Identify yourself-s." "Come play with us! "Um, sir!" The leader looked down and saw the dead bodies of people laying on the floor in a pool of blood. "F*** this!" he ran screaming as his men ran faste than he did. Amber and Jen laughed as Amber looked outside of the window, "Hey! Who's that?" she said. Jen walked and saw a man standing outside slapping the scared soldiers... It was... Kane. TO BE CONTINUED
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #65 on: June 24, 2009, 01:08:00 PM »
Amber and Jen met with Naruto, Gina, Mkygod, Phoenix and Dante as they explain about the man they saw down below. "What he looks like?" asked Phoenix. "He has these freaky looking red eyes, I think he has four pupils--" "Wait!" Gina stopped Amber, "the three other pupils. Do they look like commas?" Amber and Jen looked at each other in surprise, "Wow! Good guess," Jen said. "Kane!" "Kane... Kane.... K-Kane! Kane!" Naruto kept repeating. "Yeah! You know him?" Gina asked. "What? Michael Jackson is the guy who chained us up! I beat that guy two years ago," Naruto said remembering the time he defeated Kane. KA-BOOM!!! The entrance exploded as Kane stepped through the smoke. He looked at our heroes and stopped on Gina. "Gina Carano! The last time I remember you is when you were running away from me last year!" "You set a bomb at my mother's house you bastard!" Kane laughed, but then notices Amber looking at him funny, "What?" "You're right Naruto! He does look like Michael Jackson!" Everyone looked and said, "Ah, yeah!" "SHUT UP!!! That's it Naruto! You and me!" "Ladies first!" Naruto and Kane began a fierce battle; with missed punches, but when they missed a powerful force from their fists causes small explosions. "How're they doing this?" Dante asked. "They're exchanging chakra. Everyone we have to get out of here. We can take care of the guards outside," Gina said. They ran outside and started to fight the guards outside as low booms are coming from the hotel behind.

Randy dodged a punch from Glenn. "Good. Remember with the sharingan you have to read the person's feet and you'll know they're moves." Randy watched Glenn's feet and blocked a kick from him. Kim was training with Dana, who she thrust her fist into the ground causing a small earthquake; Kim was trying to stay on her feet. Bastiaan was there helping Kim. His hand started to produced electrictiy as he ran towards Dana. Dana disappeared and ended up behind Bastiaan and punches him in the back. He flew thirty yards away hitting the wall. He got up and did it again. Dana thrusting her fist into the ground and caused the ground beneath Bas to crumble as he fell into a hole. Kim grabbed Dana and threw her into the air, but Dana turns out to be using a subatution jutsu as she become a log. Kim felt a hand grab her by the shoulder as she felt herself fly into the air and fall back to the ground hard. "You can't let your guard down," Dana said. Kim nodded her head and prepared herself for the oncoming attack from Dana. TO BE CONTINUED
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #66 on: June 25, 2009, 06:01:12 PM »
Dana disappears in front of Kim's eyes. She starts to look around to see if she might be coming in any direction; but she didn't look down when Dana's hand grabs Kim by her leg and pulls her straight down. Kim, only her head is above ground is struggling to free herself, but couldn't. Dana comes out of the ground and dusted the dirt off her clothes, face and hair. "Always be on alert Kim," Dana said patting her on the head. Randy lands besides them and notices Kim's head sticking out of the ground. "AHHHH!!! DANA WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!!!" "Nothing! She's not decapitated," Dana said. Kim looked at Randy, but he still has the disgusted look on his face. Glenn arrived with Bastiaan, "Something has come up... Let's go."

Gina rear naked choked a guard as he passed out and focused her attentions towards the hotel where Naruto and Kane are fighting. "You guys continue, I'm gonna help Naruto," she said. "Naruto can handle Kane... He's fine!" Amber said. A large explosion came from the west wing of the hotel; Naruto came out and lands on the ground on his back. Kane followed as he lands on top of Naruto, started to lay punches on him, left to right. Gina ran towards to aid her friend, Kane swung his fist at Gina; she goes flying into the hotel. "GINA!!!" Phoenix jumping into the hotel. Naruto sees what Kane has done.... Anger starts to build.... Followed by hate.... Naruto's eyes turns red and his pupils turns into cat like.... Kane turns and sees Naruto gathering strength. "What the?" Naruto punches Kane so hard, it cuases a loud thunder noise, Kane goes flying into the air, Naruto follows. Jen, Amber, Mkygod and Dante looked in shocked. "What the hell just happened?" Dante asked. No one. Couldn't answer the question. TO BE CONTINUED.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #67 on: June 26, 2009, 02:07:41 PM »
Phoenix comes out with a pissed off Gina. "Where's Kane?" she asked. She looked around and Naruto was nowhere in sight, "Where's Naruto?" "I don't know what happened... But Naruto got so angry he attacked Kane with a firuious punch and they went off that way," Amber said pointing into the sky. A large explosion is heard followed by a large ball of fire and smoke. The others raced to the battle that may take them three hours to get there. I hope Naruto can hold out Mkygod thought. He looked at Gina and noticed that she has both anger and worry expressions on her face. A wave of chakra rocked the group as they halted right on the spot. "W-what was that?" Gina feeling the energy. "Man! That went to my stomach!" Jen said. The rest agreed, "We need to hurry," Dante said. They rushed towards the booming sounds of a fight that is occuring.

Glenn grabbed any scroll he could get his hands on, including Dana who grabbed some swords and polls. Kim, Randy and Bastiaan were ready as Bastiaan looked into the sky. Glenn and Dana notices, "It looks like he went into it!" Dana said to Glenn, "It seems so," Glenn said. "What? What's going on? Is it Gina?! The others?!" Kim wanted to know. "It's Naruto... He's gone into the tailed beast mode," Bastiaan said. TO BE CONTINUED.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #68 on: June 27, 2009, 09:20:00 AM »
It's just like reading a sci-fi novel, LOL. Great work Naruto!
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #69 on: June 27, 2009, 03:29:47 PM »
Kane lands on the ground as the ground below him explodes. He placed his hands on his chest for that he was hit with a powerful punch from Naruto; He lands in front of Kane with those red eyes. Kane can tell this is is not the Naruto, but something else. Naruto picks up Kane and started to punch him multiple times in the face, he then throws him to a boulder as it explodes on impact. Finally Mkygod, Jen, Dante, Phoenix, Amber and Gina arrived to see Naruto stomping on Kane violently. That's not Naruto! Gina ran towards the angered person. "GINA WAIT!!!" Amber yelled to her. Gina saw Kane being thrown again, but this time is skided across the ground. Gina finally arrived, but was lifted up by the neck from Naruto, she could feel the pressure he's putting on her as she tried to speak. "Naruto... Don't let it... Control you... Fight it..." No answer, as he still putting pressure on her. "It's me... Gina!..." Naruto eyes went from anger to shock. She started to see the Naruto she knows come back as the red eyes turned from red to brown, he puts down Gina and looked at her and then the others. He knew what he had done and hugged Gina. She hugged back as the others joined them. "Awww! How touching!" They turned to see Santos. TO BE CONTINUED.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #70 on: June 28, 2009, 02:48:33 PM »
"Santos! I knew you were behind this!" Amber said. "What do you want from me?" Gina said. Santos walked to the left and did a hand gesture which the ground came and formed a chair. "I want your power. Including your friends, Naruto, Mkygod and Jen. You see, you guys hold and immense power that I need to rule our world and making you my slaves... If you don't comply, I will have to use force to make you comply." Gina didn't like the sound of it as she lunged at Santos crashing her into the ground as a fierce battle began.

Meanwhile, Dana stopped and sat down on a nearby bench. "What's wrong?" Glenn asked. "It's our daughter... She's fighting Santos all ready... But what she doesn't is that Santos has a nasty trick up her sleeve!" Glenn didn't like what he heard from Dana. "All right we need to go now!" Glenn opened the wormhole as the other followed him in.

Gina was hanging on Santos was giving her fierce blows, but Santos had some punches on her as well as Gina threw Santos towards a building. The other watched as Gina slammed Santos to the ground causing a small earthquake. "Listen I got a plan... If Gina gets knocked out or something one of us jumps in and fights Santos," Phoenix said. The others agreed as they continued to watch the fight. Santos gave Gina a kick in the stomach and then a left hook to the face. Gina returns the favor by giving Santos a right hook to the chin as Santos goes flying out of the building. Gina followed as the others followed behind. Right before they went outside they heard a scream of pain. TO BE CONTINUED.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #71 on: June 29, 2009, 02:54:49 PM »
Once they heard the scream they rushed outside to see Kane, which he had stabbed Gina in the left shoulder holder her there on her knees. "NO!!!" Naruto eyes turned red and cat like as he lunged at Kane, but he felt something on his chest. He looked down to see a hand pressed against his chest and its finger tips were glowing fire blue; he looked to see Santos smiling. "You maybe strong Naruto... But I can't let you interfiere with this! SEAL!!!!" Naruto felt a rush of pain go through out his body, "AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!" he goes flying back to the building he begins to fall, but his gets caught on a dangiling rope and dangles there... Motionless. "NARUTO!!!!" Gina screamed. The others watched their friend knocked out cold by Santos's magic. Jen, Phoenix, Amber, Gina, Mkygod and Dante couldn't believe that their powerful friend has been defeated. "Don't be so dramactic Carano... This is what happens when your friends interfiere with our fights!" Santos walked up to Gina, Kane pulled the strange black sword out... Gina looked up into Santos's eyes; she leaned in on Gina and whispered, "I'll give you guys until tomorrow to defeat me," Santos throws a kick into Gina's face and she goes skidding across the ground and stopping right under Naruto. "GINA!!!"Amber screamed. Gina was motionless. Santos looked up at the others and disappeared along side Kane. TO BE CONTINUED.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #72 on: June 30, 2009, 02:22:15 PM »
Standing there in shock the others rushed to their friends aid. Mkygod and Dante helped Naruto down as the girls aided Gina who is still knocked out. "Put them here," Dante said as he cleared a long dinner table. They laid Gina and Naruto next to each other as Jen started to check Naruto. The others waited for her to say what she has saw. "There's seem to be five keyhole shaped impressions on Naruto's chest," she said. The others gathered around and saw what Jen had seen. "What did she do to him?" Amber asked, "and Gina?!". There was a pause from Jen until, "I-I don't know... This is far beyond our skills to know." A Flash occured as they whirl around to prepare for an oncoming attack, but soon relaxed when they saw Kim, Randy, Bas, Glenn and Dana walked out of the wormhole. "You guys alright?" Bas asked. "Us yeah, but Naruto and Gina," Mkygod said. They part to show the camotose Naruto and Gina. "MY DAUGHTER!!! NARUTO!!!" Dana rushed to them. "What happened?" Glenn asked. "He-Man Santos knocked both of them out... I wonder why she didn't attack us?" Phoenix wondered. Glenn looked at Gina and then Naruto. "Anit-Seal!" he said out loud. "What?" Kim asked. "Santos used a Anti-Seal spell so that Naruto will be unable to tap into his tail beasts power." "So that's why his eyes turned red and cat like!" Amber said. "Gina is fine, but won't wake up for awhile, which includes Naruto, until I find out a way to brake that spell... In the meanwhile, the rest of you must face Santos and her army alone." Mkygod looked around. "J-just the eight of us! against ten thousand!" Glenn stared at him. "Ok, ok!" They eight rushed towards New York City as Dana and Glenn stayed behind to help Naruto and Gina. The eight rushed as fast as they could to the city as they will get there tomorrow as Santos said. "All right here's the plan... We rushed and take out her army and then Kane... Then to Santos!" Phoenix said. "Right!" the rest screamed. TO BE CONTINUED.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #73 on: July 01, 2009, 02:21:59 PM »
14 seconds later... Glenn pulled out some books and begins to read on how to rid of the sealing spell that was put upon Naruto, as Dana was using her potions and medicine to help Gina come to. Then Gina begins to move a little as she opened her eyes. "Mom! Dad!" "Lay still sweetie, you've been hurt very badly," her mom said. Gina could tell as she felt pain not just from her face, but all over her body. She looked at Naruto and hoped that nothing has happened to him, as Glenn started to write something on Naruto's chest. "Where's the others? I thought I felt Randy and Kim's chakra," Gina feeling tired. "They went to stop Santos once and for all," Glenn said still writing the words. But one thing Gina couldn't get her mind off of. She remember when Naruto grabbed her by the neck and began to choke her. It felt as though it wasn't Naruto at all... But something different... Something that made Santos want from him... The question bounced around her head as she couldn't take it anymore, "Why does Santos want with Naruto? It's me!" Glenn turned to his daughter. There was a pause... "Your friend Naruto here... Has nine tails." Gina couldn't believe it. Flashes of her when she was a little girl came back. She was running away with her mom and sisters as Glenn was fighting with a group of warriors, attacking something huge. Her mother told her and her sisters not to look back, but Gina wanted to see the monster that was attacking Texas. She looked up to see red glowing eyes and... Nine tails slapping into the night sky. Gina couldn't understand why her friend Naruto has such a creature locked up inside of him. Why? and what for? TO BE CONTINUED.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #74 on: July 02, 2009, 07:45:01 PM »
Gina attempted to get up, but her mother stopped her. "You need rest sweet heart!" "I... Want... To... Know why... Naruto has... Nine tails?" Gina asking her father. Glenn didn't want to tell her the story, but he couldn't bear the voice she gave him. "It wasn't my idea... I wasn't part of the council that decided the faith of the tailed beasts... Once I heard that Naruto was going to be the cage of nine tails... It was too late." Glenn started to press his hand Naruto's chest. The hands started to glow, Glenn continued, "The council had already sealed the beast within him... There was nothing I could do." "You did! You should of destroyed nine tails when you were fighting it back in Texas...! And this wouldn't have happened if you hadn't stepped in stop it!" "I wasn't alowed in the ceremony chamber." Gina didn't say anything else. She got off the table and attempted to walk away, but the hit she took brought her down. "You see Gina! Rest!" Dana helping Gina to the table. Gina stared at Naruto who was still knocked out.

Meanwhile... Phoenix halted, so did the others. She looked confused but alert. "What is it?" Randy asked. "I don't like this... I don't like this at all!" Phoenix still staring towards the city. Mkygod started to sense and chakra he could feel. "What do you sense?" Amber asked. "Dana and Glenn were right... Ten thousand troops armed and ready are waiting for us within the city... Five thousand is in the east the other in the west," Mkygod said. Kim walked down to the banks of the shore. She stared at the water. "I'm not sure about swimming across the water... There could be anything in their. Mkygod?" He knew she wanted him to sense the water, so he did. He shook his head to say there's nothing. "Then I got a plan... We will give'em a surprise attack... We'll attack the five thousand in the east then work our way to the west and take out the other set. Once that's done we'll head to where ever Santos is." The others agreed and they followed her to the banks. TO BE CONTINUED.
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